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Bonjour!j’aimerai savoir si c’est bon sur mon texte d’anglais (sachant que je dois rajouter des modaux de probabilité:+ le verbe au prétérit ed et ing):

On a night in December, a mysterious shy man who had no friends came to a library hidden by the trees in Manhattan. He was looking for a comic strip he could read in one night. In the fiction book section, the man found a red book that caught his attention. He was intrigued by it. He was very curious! Then he borrowed the book, he bought a pepperoni pizza and he came back home. Arrived at his destination, he opened the book, and then, on the first page, the first quote written was « do you want to play with Dan? »

(Si quelqun pourrait me rajouter des modaux et des phrases contenant used to ou no longer sa serai sympa!!)

Sagot :

Réponse :Tout est ok, mais tu pourrais faire des modifications, comme dire “ a shy, mysterious man” a la place de “a mysterious shy man”. Tu pourrais aussi dire “while browsing the fiction section, the man found a red book.” a la place de “in the fiction book section, the man found a red book”. Autre que ça, s’est parfait

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