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Bonjour, vous pouvez me dire si il ya des fautes dans mon textes, et si il faut reformuler ou ajouter des phrases svp merci

After the sleeping  beauty was asleep, the years passed slowly. The kingdom had become unlivable, the sky was gray and the flowers were fading. One day a very handsome prince charming, blond hair, tall,wirh blues eyes. Herard the rumors about a sleeping princess.he decided to try his luck in vain.
So the sleeping beauty remaind asleep until...

One day during the spring season,a creature that seemed to be a man appeared.
He looked more like an orgre than a man.
He was small, he had a huge nose, big ears, he was bald, he was really ugly.
And the worst thing is that he was necrophile.
So one day, during his walk in the castle, ans he found a girl, the most beautiful he's never seen.
Her face and her body was perfect, everything was perfect.
The little man could not resist touching her, he started undressing her, and during his mouvement, he kissed her, on the lips.
The sleeping beauty woke up and when she sqw that she was getting raped, she quickely react, she even tied his eyes, and then she fled.
Outside, everyone was disoriented and confused.​

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aurore83

Réponse :

ton histoire est vraiment drole mais il faut que tu en leve le mot wirh  car ca ne veut rien dire dac  sinon j'aime l'histoire meme si c'est un peut triste  

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Je pense qu’après tout c’est bien et je suppose que c’était des fautes de frappe ;))

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