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Each person has a dream job. For example, my uncle since the childhood dreamed to become a lawyer. My dream job is a doctor.Since the childhood I was interested in biology. I liked to play with toys in the doctor. I think doctor is very important and complex work, but at the same time she is always demanded. Everyone respects doctors. Why the doctor is complex work ? In the first because the doctor has to treat people. He can’t be mistaken, because by reason of small mistake people can die. In the second the doctor needs to learn a lot of things: names of medicines, anatomy and many other things.To become the doctor it is necessary to have strong character.The doctor can’t be afraid of a blood, the syringe or medicines. The doctor always has to be quiet and balanced. For example, the surgeon has to be able to react quickly in emergency situations and to cope with a stress. Also the doctor surely has to be honest. He shouldn’t take bribes or tell the truth. Doctor is a noble profession. He gives to the person hope for recovery.Do you know why I want to become a doctor? Because I want to help people, to save their lives. What can be better, than happiness in the opinion of the patient, than the healthy child and the recovered person? Nothing. And I want that people were grateful to me. I want that I worked in the pleasure.Of course, I am afraid that I won’t cope with this work. That I will lack knowledge and the person will die from – for my mistake.I am afraid not to manage to react and to undertake something. But I want to try. I will use the best efforts to become the doctor and to help people.Actually the next year I plan to come to medical college. I have a dream. And I will make everything that to carry out her and to become the real doctor.And I would like that each school student had a dream job and that everyone strove for the goal.

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Bonjour,

Each person has a dream job. For example, my uncle since the childhood dreams to become a lawyer. My dream job is a doctor Since the childhood I have been interested in biology.

I liked to play with toys in the doctor. I think the doctor is very important and complex work, but at the same time she is always demanded. Everyone respects doctors. Why the doctor is complex work? In the first because the doctor has to treat people.He can’t be mistaken, because by reason of small mistake people can die. In the second the doctor needs to learn a lot of things: names of medicines, anatomy and many other things To become the doctor it is necessary to have strong character The doctor can’t be afraid of a blood, the syringe or medicines. The doctor always has to be quiet and balanced. For example, the surgeon has to be able to react quickly in emergency situations and to cope with a stressAlso the doctor surely has to be honest. He shouldn’t take bribes or tell the truth. Doctor is a noble profession. He gives to the person hope for recovery Do you know why I want to become a doctor? Because I want to help people, to save their lives. What can be better, then happiness in the opinion of the patient, than the healthy child and the recovered person? Nothing And I want that people were grateful to me. I want that I worked at the pleasure.Of course, I am afraid that I won’t cope with this work. That I will lack knowledge and the person will die from – for my mistake.I am afraid not to manage to react and to undertake something. But I want to try. I will use the best efforts to become the doctor and to help people.Actually the next year I plan to come to medical college.I have a dream And I will make everything that to carry out her and to become the real doctor and I would like that each school student had a dream job and that everyone strive for the goal.

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