Pouvez-vous me dire si c'est correct d'un point de vue grammatical? Si j'ai utilisé V+ing quand il le fallait par exemple: When the show begins, the wolf expects to see a little girl’s show who plays the role of “the little red riding hood”. But when the girl takes off her cape, the wolf is falling in love by looking at the beautiful sexy woman. His reactions are crazy and excessive: first, he is whistling in order to try and pick up her. He is going mad and insane, hitting himself with a hammer and his eyes are popping out. Then, he is clapping and whistling again thanks to an imaginary machine.
