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Bonjour,est-ce que quelqu’un de performant en anglais pourrait me corriger svp ?

Bonjourestce Que Quelquun De Performant En Anglais Pourrait Me Corriger Svp class=

Sagot :

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HELLO ;)

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bien joué tu n'a pas d'erreur!!

(n'hésite pas a mettre plus de point d'exclamation)

a bientot ^^

estelledressage

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Voici la correction!

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I'm Addison and I'm 16 years old. I am the person who suffered from a rumour that said that I was a bad girl. This rumour started last year because I left my boyfriend. My boyfriend was so mad that he started spreading rumours about me...

When people knew about these rumours that he spread, they started harassing and bullying me, because they beleived him. They pushed me in the stairs, insulted me and more mean things.

I was very mad and sad but fortunately, my real friends supported me mentally during this hard time. They told about this rumour to the school's principal and that helped me so much. I am so thankful towards my friends.

Today, everything is over. I am very happy.

Moral of the story: We shouldn't spread rumours about someone because that can hurt them. Don't do the same mistake like my boyfriend because this isn't nice at all. If you are asking if this is a real story, yes, i This story talks about a boy who ruined my year.

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