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Firstly, I can tell you on the environment. Owing to do not recycle, the Ocean and the world is polute. If we do not recycle, this world during not in long time. So, we can ask the question, what would happen if everyone recycled ? What if all the iceberg melt ? Why the iceberg melt ? Because of the polution,( la pollution qui est créée par nous tous ). Concernic animals, we can ask the question again, how will we live if turtles or every animal go extinct ?
So, to conclude, everyone is concerde on this polution, we reduce plastic or every source of polution.​

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Bonjour,

Firstly, I will talk about the environment.  The Ocean and the world are polluted  because we don't not recycle enough.  If we do not recycle, our world will be in great danger .

Concerning animals, we can ask the question again, how will we live with in a world where species ( animals, plants) are on the verge of extinction ? How can we bear the fact that we are responsible for extinction of endangered animals.

Then, we can wonder  what would happen if all the iceberg melt . Scientists say that it is a consequence of the pollution we create.

So, to conclude, everyone is concerned about this pollution. We have to reduce plastic or every source of pollution as much as we can. We must act with environmental awareness.

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