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Bonjour , a toutes et a tous !

consignes de mon travail : 

- Rédiger un poème sur le même modèle que ceux travaillés en classe: 'Trilingual and funny' et 'Down-to-earth and cool'. Respecter la même structure et forme.

I am trilingual and funny

I am trilingual and funny
I like travelling to new places
I love soccer
I hate country music
I want to be successful
I am trilingual and funny

I can learn languages easily
I cannot play baseball
I must finish my studies
I must not procrastinate so much
I need to listen to music everyday
I am trilingual and funny

I'd like to visit Autralia
I'd like to be a famous actor
I'd like to have a sportcar
I'd like to learn about philosophy
I'd like to see a volcano errupt
I am trilingual and funny


'Down-to-earth and cool'



I'm down to earth and cool 
I'd like to be more like my Dad who's athletic and tall 
I must tidy my room which is an utter pigsty 
I mustn't be impolite 

I'm down to earth and cool 
I dream of visiting New Zealand 
I try to wake up early. It doesn't happen. 
I worry about my grandmother who's 85 and lives alone 
I remember my dreams 

I'm down to earth and cool 
I can be angry when mocked 
I can be friendly when flirting 
I feel sad when I am homesick 
I feel moved when I listen to jazz 
I believe in holidays spent at the beach 
I love playing Scrabble and watching tennis


Voici mon travaille : je voudrais savoir , si vous pouvait me corriger les fautes de langues , et me dire si j'ai bien respecter les consigne , si c'est un bon travail ! merci d'avances !! :)

I am in my world and dreamer

I am in my world and dreamer
I dream of living in California
I love Basket-ball
I mustn't discourage me
I try to be a good person
I remember usually my memories


I feel lonely
i believe in my dream
i'd like becoming happy one day
I feel sad when people are unhappy
i should not be so optimistic
I am in my world and dreamer


I dream of visiting Brazil
I want becoming a doctor
I am in my world and dreamer
I love help people 
i'd like travel all my life
I dream of helping the poorest people
I am in my world and dreamer

Sagot :

Bonjour, j'ai corrigé tes fautes

I am in my world and dreamer

I am in my world and a dreamer
I dream of living in California
I love Basket-ball
I mustn't discourage myself
I try to be a good person
I usually remember  my memories


I feel lonely
I believe in my dream
I'd like to become happy one day
I feel sad when people are unhappy
i should not be so optimistic
I am in my world and a dreamer


I dream of visiting Brazil
I want to become a doctor
I am in my world and a dreamer
I love  to help people 
I'd like to travel all my life
I dream of helping the poorest people
I am in my world and a dreamer
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