Bonjour, tu as utilisé le traducteur, et ça se voit... depuis quand on dit "en 1990" en anglais?
Phrases à corriger:
Chris is a very brainy young man. He got his diploma at Emory University in 1990.
He rejects the modern consumer society and the materialism which prevents the man to show his real nature, as he said.
Peux-tu me dire ce que tu voulais dire par "we will any later?"
...that he will do a travel in search of him, away of the society, even in the middle of Alaska, into the wild.
Also we see in the studied extract that they bought him a new car.
Tu mélanges le passé et le présent... Met soit tout au passé soit tout au présent mais pas les deux!
