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Merci :

Hello, everybody!

Today, I am here to present my program for become the president of the student council.

My name is Paul, I am 13 years old, and I live in Luxembourg.

I have 3 older brothers, Raphaël, Victor and Alexis.

My hobby is climbing, and my favorite subject is french, I’m also good for redaction and make statement.

I’m also hard-working, confident and outgoing.

(I want become the president for solve problemes of this school. I am willing to put our all into my

position and each task that is put in front of me.)

Now place to my program :

Firstly, if I am elected, I envisage to organize more cultural outings, because I think that it is better for people to learn outside like going into a museum, visit places and so for knowing more about other culture.

Next, I also plan to extend the break for the student, so they can be more relaxed and learn better and efficiently during the lessons.

Finally …………………………………………………………………..

And don’t forget

“Take note, the right vote is Paul Jean for President” Thank you!