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bonjour je voudrais savoir si mon devoir est correct svp ? je dois le rendre comme e-mail à mon professeur en envoyant en messagerie pédagogique .


Hello,
during my holidays, I went to visit the Reunion basins by car, which said, Beef basins, Esperance basins, and many more, they were all very beautiful! the next day, I went to the beach with the family.
During the other days I was out with my educator, we went to the beach with some friends, we had to eat there, It was a great day!
During the holidays I should go to the campsite, but in the end it was canceled because one of the educators had the covid.
Then I stayed at home for the rest of the day, the weather was nice but I didn't go out, there had been some thunderstorms but no rain.

Sagot :

Réponse:

salut , il y avait quelques erreurs mais sinon c'est top ! aloès voilà :

Hello,

during my holidays, I went to visit the basins of Réunion by car, which said, Bassins de boeuf, Bassins d'Espérance, and many others, they were all very beautiful! the next day I went to the beach with the family.

The other days I went out with my educator, we went to the beach with friends, we had to eat there, it was a great day!

During the holidays I had to go camping, but in the end it was canceled because one of the participants had covid.

Then I stayed home for the rest of the day, it was sunny but I didn't go out, there had been a few thunderstorms but no rain.

I wish you a good day <3