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Bonjour ! Bonne année ! J’aurais besoin d’aide s,il vous palit en anglais, est ce que vous pouvez corriger mon texte ? Merci d’avance vous êtes les best ! ❤

Texte : once upon a time there was a bad Thanksgiving ... I'll tell you about it! It was November 25, 2021. It was very cold that day! I was so happy to go to my friends. Each year we celebrate Thanksgiving together. I took my car to go there. I was in the middle of a street when my car pulled up. I tried to restart my car to no avail. So I decided to call a tow truck for my car and took a cab to my friends' house. The problem is, I got to my friends' house late. I apologized and we all sat down to eat. There were all kinds of delicacies from the world on this table. we were all ready to eat when suddenly Anna's cat (my friend) jumped on the table and stepped on all the food. There were really everywhere. We all helped Anna recover from this disaster and decided to go out to eat at a restaurant. New problem, there was no room in the restaurants next door
without reservation. So we went back to Anna's place and ate what was there while watching a movie on TV. I spent the night there because I didn't have my car and the others had gone home. One of the worst Thanksgiving ever, I swear!​

Sagot :

A la place de « there were really everywhere » dit « there was food everywhere on the table » ensuite a la place de « we all helped Anna recover from this disaster » dit plutôt « we all helped Anna cleaning the mess » ce qui veut dire « on a tous aider Anna à nettoyer ce bazar »
Voilà je ne vois pas d’autres grosses erreurs
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