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the topic I have chosen to present is a movie. The movie called the lion king II, Simba's pride. In my first part, I'm going to describe the first Lion king. In my second part, i 'm going to talk about the realization of the lion king Iands and most of these characters. Let's start with my first part, The lion king. Firstly Simba son of Lion king Mufasa, is a dynamic, always ready to go sully thing. But Scar, the king's brother, plots in the shadows with the hyenas, one of his diabolical plans succeeded in expelling simba on the pride lands. Collected by Timon and pumba, Simba grows up in the philosophy oh « hakuna matata », living each moment fully, without asking. Until the day he falls no-to-nose with Nala, his childhood friend.​

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The topic I have chosen to present is a movie. The movie is called the lion king II, Simba's pride. In the first part, I'm going to describe the first Lion king. In the second part, i 'm going to talk about the realization of the lion king Iands and most of these characters. Let's start with the first part, The lion king. Firstly Simba , son of the Lion king Mufasa, is a very dynamic lion cub , always ready to go sully things. But Scar, the king's brother, plots in the shadows with the hyenas. One of his diabolical plans succeeded : he expelled simba of the pride lands. Meeting Timon and pumba, Simba grows up in the philosophy of « hakuna matata », living each moment fully, without asking. Until the day he falls no-to-nose with Nala, his childhood friend.