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Bonjour, j'ai un dm à rendre pour demain, c'est une lettre de motivation en anglais. Quelqu'un pourrait t'il me corriger les fautes ? Merci d'avance

Dear Dir or Madam,
I'm 16 ans I'm actually completing my professional Bachelor for electrician fitter at the lycée Airbus, a vocational School of aeronautics located in Toulouse. Consequently I would like to apply for the job of electrician in Airbus Helicopter.
I have already had work expérience in a électrician. I have twice training period in order to train me, as a result which brought me a strong added value. So, a versatility for my training periods taught me how to do a lot of things. Besides, I have all thé motivation necessary for this job. However, i am very interesting in a fleet helicopters. More and more, it would be an honor for me to work in helicopter. Your sincelery.

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Dear Dir or Madam,

I'm 16 Years old I'm actually completing my professional Bachelor for electrician fitter at the Secondary school Airbus, a vocational School of aeronautics located in Toulouse. Consequently I would like to apply for the job of electrician in Airbus Helicopter.

I have already had work expérience in a électrician. I have twice training period in order to train me, as a result which brought me a strong added value. So, a versatility for my training periods taught me how to do a lot of things. Besides, I have all (thé?) motivation necessary for this job. However, i am very interesting in a fleet helicopters. More and more, it would be an honor for me to work in your work: Airbus helicopter. Your sincelery.

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