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This video was published by PBS Nature on November 29, 2006. This video is about the sacred animal of Hinduism, the "sacred cow".
This video presents us the very important role of cows in the religion of Hinduism.
Cows are sacred in the religion of Hinduism. The divine bull guards the Hindu temple.
They livein the forest but especially in the city
This animal is considered as the "mother" of civilization, its milk feeding people.
In the religion of Hinduism, a ceremony is organized for the cows. In this ceremony, Hindus give offerings like flowers, food to a cow.This ceremony celebrates the cows.
Hindus also practice this ceremony to get luck in different things like luck for their professional careers.
But in India, not everyone considers the cow as a sacred animal. Some people in India kidnap cows and eat them or sell them.