Bonjour
I don't usually go to the cinema but yesterday I went to see a film. It was fantastic. I cried a little because the film was so romantic. Melissa was with me. She never cries at the cinema so she didn't cry yesterday but she also enjoyed the film very much.
Now I am writting to my friend Peter to tell him about it. Peter usually lives here in London, like me but this week he is living in Bristol with her aunt* because his parents are in Italy. They went there last week on business. Peter is one of my best friends. He is fourteen years old and we go to the same school.
Last summer Melisa, Peter and I went to Amsterdam on holiday for a week. We really had a nice time. We stayed at my uncle's house. His name is George. He is an engineer. He is always busy but that week he was on holidays and he took good care of us. He showed us the city and we liked it very much.
I must study now. I am learning French this year as I would like to visit Paris next summer.
EXPLICATIONS
court récap.
On emploie le présent simple lorsque l'on parle d'habitudes, de faits avérés (sentiments), , de vérités générales.
Le présent Be+ v-ing = pour des actions qui sont en train de se passer.
le prétérit pour des actions passées terminées
le prétérit be + -ing lorsque l'action passée était "en train" de se dérouler
*Il y a une erreur dans ton texte : with her aunt. Ce devrait être : with his aunt. On parle de la tante de Peter. Les adjectifs possessifs ne s'accordent pas comme en français avec ce qui est possédé, mais avec le possesseur.... la tante de Peter : Peter est masculin => HIS aunt
tu peux en parler avec ta prof !!
je t'ai souligné dans la mesure du possible les indicateurs qui justifie l'emploi du temsp que j'ai choisi
Bonne fin de journée ☺☺☺
