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Bonjour pourriez-vous corriger les erreurs de ce texte en anglais sachant qu'il doit être au passé :

On a december 6. During a winter night. There was a lot of rain and thunderstorms. After 2 hours ride the 3 friends came back to the camp because of bad weatherPeter : James, hurry up ! We going to be all wet
James : I’m trying, I’m breathless.
John, the third friend of the group, stopped suddenly and said something : John (screaming) :  Peter, James I need to turn around, I’ve lost my phone.
James (hungry) : Are you serious ! Bro it’s not the right time we need to go back to the camp.
John : I know I’m sorry. Let’s go back to the camp, I'm coming in a few minutes.
James turned his head and saw a hut : Ok I have an idea, go and look for  your phone and Peter and I are waiting for you in this hut. 
John : Ok I try to hurry. 
30 minutes later John wasn’t still there. Peter and James were worried. Suddenly they heard a scream. Instantly the 2 friends panicked. People went out to search our camarade. They walked few desperate minutes when they found their friend. Peter was tied up on a tree. He was asleep and not moved. Directly the two friends stressed. They removed their friends' links. After few slaps to wake him up, Peter saided words.
Peter : A murdurer… he hit me with… 
James : With what ?
Peter : A branch of woods.
John and James took their camarade and tan in the direction of our camp. After a lot of time when they started to get tired, the three friends heard a sound of crackle in the wood. 
Peter : This is the person who has tied me up.
Directly, the boys took branches for our protection. Suddenly, the man appeared and without leaving time for the three boys, he cut them.
Here it is during that night that the three friends died. A night that they thought was banal but that had surprises in store for them.
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During the night of December 6. There was a lot of rain and thunderstorms. After a 2 hours ride, James, Peter and Jake came back home from the camp because of bad weather

Peter : James, hurry up ! We going to be all wet

James : I’m trying, I’m breathless.

John, suddenly stopped and screamed:  Peter, James I need to turn around, I’ve lost my phone.

James (hungry) : Are you serious ! Bro it’s not the right time we need to go back to the camp.

John : I know I’m sorry. Let’s go back to the camp, I'm coming in a few minutes.

James turned his head and saw a hut.

James: I have an idea. Go and search for your phone. I will wait with Peter  in this hut.  

John : I ll try to hurry.  

30 minutes later John wasn’t still there. Peter and James were getting worried. Suddenly they heard a scream. Instantly the 2 friends panicked. They then went out to search their comrade. After walking for 10 minutes which felt like an hour, they found their friend. Peter was tied up on a tree. He was asleep and didn't moved. The two friends were getting even more anxious and scared. They removed their friends' links. They got to wake him up by slapping his face. He then started talking.  

Peter : A murderer… he hit me with…  

James : With what ?

Peter : A branch of woods.

Fastly they carried their friend in direction of the camp. Carrying their friend in the middle of the storm felt like a torture and the boys were exhausted. After 30 minutes from the spot where they found Peter, the three friends heard a sound of crackle in the wood. And saw a man coming toward them.  

Peter : This is the person who tied me up.

Instantly, the boys took branches to protect themselves. Suddenly, the man appeared. He has a huge knife in his right hand and a rope on his left hand. He was smiling, and without giving the the boys time to understand what was happening, he killed the three boys with his knife.  

Here is the course of the events where the three friends died. A night that they thought was banal but that had surprises in store for them.

Explications :

Ton histoire et superbe! Et tu l as hyper bien ecrit. Il faut juste que tu travaille sur tes verbes. Sinon bravo.

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