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Bonjour, demain j'ai un exposé a faire en anglais ( type brevet )
J'ai fait mon texte mais j'y est passé tellement de temp que je ne vois plus les erreur.
Pouvez vous corriger mon texte?

This document is a comic. This title is " The incredible Hulk", from George Roussos and Paul Reinman, and published in 1 may 1962. The Hulk is a marvel Comics characters created in 1962. In the process of trying out one of the discoveries the Doctor Banner was exposed to radiation and transformed into a mutant humanoid monster with incredible power, then whenever he was angry his transformation would occut. His life is threatened. Hulk avete created by Stan Lee who is the scriptwriter and Jack Kirby who is the cartoonist. In france, it appears for the first time in the review fantask number five. In foreground, a boy in front of Hulk with a pants and a tee-shirt pink, with above a white doctor gown. This shoes is light brown. He is have a glasses and a red hair. To the right 2 persons, 1 women and 1 men. The women have a dress with a beel shoes black. A next the man have a suit set the shoes and a hat. To the left a man with a pants, and a shirt with a hat and on this hans a weopon. This persons pointed Hulk. In large and in the middle Hulk, is seen to be green but here it is gray, with a torn tank top and a damaged pants. He does not have a shoes. This hair is short and black. In the background, there is a boat, and a rocket. The rocket is white. And the boat is yellow, ans is above the sea.
Above and next to Hulk there are writting above Hulk they are the strangest man of all time, next they are is he man or monster or is he both. To the left i can read fantasy as you like it. Around Hulk there are black lines. The bottom is grey. The title is written in yellow and red. The hand of Hulk is around the little persons. We see that the people around Hulk are terrified. This persons running for run away from Hulk. All leters are in capital. In the top right-hand there is 3 square with in writting in the bottom there is 1 may above i can read MC . Still above i can read approved by the comics code. In the top left-hand corner there is a circle with in writting 12. Above i can read IND. The floor is green with the shadow of persons and Hulk. Behind the persons with the gun there is a white smoke. Around the doctor there is an black auro. hulk don't look mean but he don't look nice no longer.
All the characters is standing. Hulk is big. The all characters is slim. Hulk is muscular. The doctor in this thirtys. The advert is aimed at children also to adults. Hulk is seen to be green but here it is grey. The aim to have put Hulk in the middle, to show its power, putting it in gray makes a pot of contrast with the other people. It reminds me of cartoon style. I am under the impression that they wanted a little erased Hulk by highlighting the characters around.
What i find interresting is that the characters around Hulk even if they are in bright color we seen thel less than Hulk.

Merci d'avance
Bonne fin de week-end

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Je n'ai pas tout mis mais voila les quelques erreurs que j'ai pu remarqué dans la premiere partie : The title is " The incredible Hulk", from George Roussos and Paul Reinman, and was published in 1 may 1962. [...]  Hulk have been created by Stan Lee, [...]   with a pants and a pink tee-shirt. His shoes is light brown.  He have glasses and a red hair. To the left a man with a pant.

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