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Je fait un texte en anglais quelqu’un pourrais me corriger les fautes svp: Today I am at the ideal weight for my height, I exercise sometimes not always, I prepare my meals and choose the foods that are good for my body, and the best I feel good about myself, and that is why I understand the importance of taking care of it.

To start my diet in general terms it was always healthy (if possible), although the truth is I eat a lot of junk food sporadically. I believe and feel that food is energy, and that energy can be positive or negative. Eating consciously is part of loving and taking care of yourself, that's how I see it.
In my daily days I usually eat three times a day and generally eat: salmon, have cereal for breakfast, eat fruits although very little, chicken, pasta, I also drink a lot of Coca Cola daily but I also drink a lot of water and very little vegetables because not It is something that I like a lot but I do know that it is good for my body.

I hope to continue improving my habits little by little and to be able to learn more about the subject because it is something that interests me very much and I think that we should all inform ourselves, even in a basic way, about how the way we eat can influence so much not only our health, but also in our quality of life.

Sagot :

Bonsoir ,

To start my diet in generous terms, was always breast (if possible), although the truth is that I eat a lot of junk food sporadically. I believe and feel that food is energy and that this energy can be positive or negative. Eating is part of love and taking care of yourself, that's how I see it.

In my daily days I usually eat three times a day and usually eat: salmon, breakfast cereal, fruit, chicken, pasta, everyday I also drink Coke but I also drink a lot water and very little veg because it's not something I like but I know it's good for my body.

I hope to continue to improve my habits little by little and be able to learn more about the subject because it is something that interests me a lot and I think we should all educate ourselves, even in a basic way, on how we We eat can have a huge impact not only on our health, but also on our quality of life.

Voilà il n'y avait pas beaucoup d'erreurs mais après c'était un peu mauvais dans le sens où tu tu exprime

Mais après c'est très bien .

Bonne soirée :)