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Bonjour vous pouvez m'aider à améliorer ma dissertation merci .


THE IMAGINATION . First f all what is the imagination . It is an indispensable faculty for the human species . It help the spaciest human to create , or else to invente of course . But it is also essential to solve problems , to imagine scenario , sometimes for to anticipate some actions . So we can to ask why my imagination is very important for me .

Firstly , I have a big imagination in other words my imagination is like bottomless pit. Firstly my imagination help me and give me a bubble , something of the sort , where for me always dream is possible, there are no limits , and I can’t be who I always will to become , for example I always dreamed to enter to my favorite manga world or to be a superstar . Furthermore is helping me to disconnect for the reality and to go to my world .

Secondly , my imagination help me to be organised . It is very hard to explain , it helps me to prepare anything in advance

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THE IMAGINATION . First of all what is the imagination. It is an indispensable faculty for the human species . It helps the spaciest human to create , or else to invente of course . But it is also essential to solve problems , to imagine scenario , sometimes for to anticipate some actions . So we can to ask why my imagination is very important for me .

Firstly , I have a big imagination in other words my imagination is like bottomless pit. Firstly*, my imagination help me and give me a bubble , something of the sort , where for me always dream is possible, there are no limits , and I can’t be who I always will to become , for example I always dreamed to enter to my favorite manga world or to be a superstar . Furthermore is helping me to disconnect for the reality and to go to my world .

Secondly , my imagination help me to be organised . It is very hard to explain , it helps me to prepare anything in advance.

En tout cas ton texte est passionnant je n'est pas tellement trouvé de fautes.

J'ai souligné les choses manquantes et j'ai mis en italique les choses à enlever!

*Si tu mets une seconde fois firstly (premièrement) ton texte n'a plus de sens, si tu veux mets secondly.

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