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Bonjour pouvez vérifier si il y’a des erreurs dans ma rédaction d’anglais je devais raconter une journée au prétérit.
The last saturday , i went to my bestfriend House , Neïcya , i lived
close to her house but i moved out recently. We were suppose to go
to the mall but it was raining so we stayed at home. We watched
a movies, it was "Annie", the film talked about a little girl Annie
who is an Orphelin and she is trying to find her parents. It was
very interinsting , After that we left to the pizzeria to eat, we
both took two pizzas because we were so hungry! Mine was
delicious! then we went back home played to the Sims 4 and
talked for hours and hours, the time passed, the afternoon
the rain stopped so we went outside and played at the parc,
We were sliding off the tobogan, but my friends had hit
a stone She hurt her little toes since she wast fine we
went back home, and i tried to confort her. The pain had
passed so we were laughing and talking it started to get late
So I went back at my house. It was a really good day.

Sagot :

Voici les quelques corrections:
•We were suppose to go to the mall.
•We watched a movie which is called Annie
• The film spoke about a little Orphelin girl who is called Annie and who’s trying to find her parents.
• Then, we were so hungry that we decided to go to the pizzeria and we both took two pizza!
• On the afternoon, the rain stopped (...)
• But my friend hurt her little toe against a stone so we went back home and I tried to confort her.
• Her pain passed so we started laughing again and talking but it was late so I went back to my house.

Les autres phrases sont correctes, j’ai juste réécrit celle qui contenaient des fautes ou bien des reformulations.

Bonne soirée!
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