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Each person has a dream job. For example, my father since the childhood dreamed to become a business man . My dream job is a doctor.Since the childhood I was interested in biology. I liked to play with toys in the doctor. I think doctor is very important and complex work, but at the same time she is always demanded. Everyone respects doctors. Why the doctor is complex work ? In the first because the doctor has to treat people. He can’t be mistaken, because by reason of small mistake people can die. In the second the doctor needs to learn a lot of things: names of medicines, anatomy and many other things.To become the doctor it is necessary to have strong character.The doctor can’t be afraid of a blood, the syringe or medicines. The doctor always has to be quiet and balanced. For example, the surgeon has to be able to react quickly in emergency situations and to cope with a stress. Also the doctor surely has to be honest. He shouldn’t take bribes or tell the truth. Doctor is a noble profession. He gives to the person hope for recovery.Do you know why I want to become a doctor? Because I want to help people, to save their lives. What can be better, than happiness in the opinion of the patient, than the healthy child and the recovered person? Nothing. And I want that people were grateful to me. I want that I worked in the pleasure.Of course, I am afraid that I won’t cope with this work. That I will lack knowledge and the person will die from – for my mistake.I am afraid not to manage to react and to undertake something. But I want to try. I will use the best efforts to become the doctor and to help people.

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Each person has a dream job. For example, my father has always dreamed to become a business man . My dream job is a doctor .Since my childhood I was interested in biology. I liked to play with those toys which were in the doctor's waiting room. I think a doctor is very important and has a complex work, but at the same time they are always demanded. Everyone respects doctors. Why is being a doctor such a complex job ? Well, In the first place doctors have to treat people. He can’t make a mistake, because a small mistake can kill a person. In the second place the doctor needs to learn a lot of things: like the names of medicines, anatomy and many other things. To become a doctor it is necessary to have strong character.The doctor can’t be afraid of a blood, of a syringe nor medicines. The doctor always has to be quiet and balanced. For example, the surgeon has to be able to react quickly in emergency situations and to cope with stress. Also the doctor surely has to be honest. He shouldn’t bribe and tell the truth. A doctor is a noble profession. He gives to the person hope in recovery. Do you know why I want to become a doctor? Because I want to help people, to save their lives. What can be better than the happiness of the patient, than the healthy child and the recovered person? Nothing. And I want people to be grateful to me. I want to in pleasure.Of course, I am afraid that I cant cope with this work. That from my lack of knowledge and my mistakes people might die .I am afraid i wont be able to manage and react when necessary . But I want to try. I will make efforts to become the doctor and to help people.

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