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Bonjour,
Je dois écrire le résumé d’enola Holmes à partir de quand elle va à Londres en anglais. Vous pouvez me corriger svp

Enola goes to London and buys clothes for her brothers to find her.. Enola remembers that her mother often wrote to a person living in London, Mrs Gryston. She finds her a karate teacher. Enola goes to Limehouse lane, a place her mother was talking about when suddenly someone tries to drown her: This is the man who was trying to find the viscount. His name is Linthorn. She says that she does not know where he is. She fights with this man Now she wants to save the Viscount of Tewksbury. . She goes to her castle and says that she is a detective and that she is Sherlock Holmes' assistant. Mycroft asks a detective to find enola. Enola eventually found the viscount at the market and took him to his lodging because they were in great danger

The detective trying to find Enola is actually in the apartment. She tells the viscount to leave to save her life. The detective finally managed to catch him and Mycroft takes him to boarding school and takes his money. At the school, girls were taught how to laugh or eat, how to be true ladies. Enola received a parcel but the viscount was in it. He wanted to help her from the school. When they left the school, they went to Basilwether in the Viscount’s house. Enola realized it wasn’t her uncle who killed her father but her grandmother. In the house, Linthorn tries to kill them but eventually enola kills him. Afterwards ,Tewksbury’s grandmother arrives and tries to kill her grandson for the future of the country.

Luckily, Tewksbury put in some kind of protection. Enola finally found a message from her mother in the paper saying to meet her at the royal academy at 5:00. She understands that it is a message from Sherlock. Enola finally returns to her room where she finds... Her mother!! Her mother explains to her that she left to live alone. Indeed, Enola has the opposite meaning alone

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jouji5

Réponse:

bonjour

ton paragraphe est à peu près juste mais tu dois éviter de répéter le nom enola tu peux utiliser she ou the girl