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every summer, in the month of august, usually we go on vacation in turkey, for two or even three days. during these vacations, we went to the sea, the beach, visit museums, different places and tourist places.
unfortunately this year, due to covid, i was not able to go, i felt a bit distant, punished for our vacation, this being for our good, because we could be confined if the country itself did it. we spent our holidays, here in france, in normandy, it was rather nice, but i wanted to go back to turkey, to visit other monuments and places, and especially to find our house with the swimming pool, and of course my cousins ​​and my cousins. this being, we will be going back next year so just a little patience.

Bonjour Pouvezvous Le Corriger Et Maider À Faire Avec Les Consignes Du 1 Svp Devoir Noté Every Summer In The Month Of August Usually We Go On Vacation In Turkey class=

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every summer, in the month of august, usually we go on vacation in turkey, for two or even three days. during these vacations, we went to the sea, the beach, visit museums, different places and tourist places.

unfortunately this year, due to covid, i was not able to go, i felt a bit distant, punished for our vacation, this being for our good, because we could be confined if the country itself did it. we spent our holidays, here in france, in normandy, it was rather nice, but i wanted to go back to turkey, to visit other monuments and places, and especially to find our house with the swimming pool, and of course my cousins ​​and my cousins. this being, we will be going back next year so just a little patience.

Explications :

Je corrige juste ton texte, sans particulierement tenir compte de l'enonce (ici 2 enfants qui mangent et retournent a l ecole)

-Ecrire In the month est facultatif, tu peux juste ecrire "in August"

-"we usually go..."

-"days" or "weeks" ?

-"are going" usually implique que c est une habitude, tu dois donc employer le present

-Repetition de "places", tu peux peut etre trouver un synonyme ou tourner ta phrase autrement

-"Turkey" majuscule, nom propre

-"find" Find back? retrouver

-"cousins and cousins"?

Ton texte est bien ecrit, Tu as justes quelques erreurs a corriger.

Verifie bien que tu as respecte la consigne.

(clavier norvegien sans accents et certains symboles)

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