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Bonjour à tous, pour demain je dois me décrire rapidement et raconter mes vacances mais l’anglais ce n’es pas mon point fort:( Donc si l’un d’entre vous pourrais m’aider ça serait vraiment génial.

Voici ce que j’ai écrit:
My firstname is Aicha and my surname is Benslama . I'm thirteen years old and i am in 4ème. I was born in Paris On twenty-nine, May, 2007.

I have got one brother and one sister.

I live in Asnières. My favorite hobbies are Piano because i play piano with two friends.

My favorite subjects are Physical Education and Mathématiques. I love so much music, i always listening to music. I love Billie Eilish and Lil pump. Physically, i am medium and I have brown eyes. My hairs are medium-long and chestnut.

During my holiday, I went to Italy for a week. It was the first time. I went there. I was in a village called "Bossolasco", two hundred kilometers from Turin. I liked this village very much. It was very beautiful because the streets were narrow and former. When i returned to Asnières, the weather was cold.
A few weeks later, i went to Bretagne in a village called "Combrit" in Finistère. My Family was present as well as my friends. There was of the rain during all my stay, then we were little to bathe. It is bad.
When i had come back from Bretagne, i went to see my friends and i was able to rest before school.


Merci d’avance

Sagot :

Réponse:

correction des erreurs

date de naissance : May twenty first

I'm fond of music ( lus adapté u texte)

voyage Finistère : It was raining during my whole stay, la partie d'après je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire.

When I came back ..

j'espère t'avoir aidé :)