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pouvez vous me corriger ce texte et voir si il n'y a pas de faute svp au plus vite merci

Hi my name is Mamadou Slasta I'm a 15 yeras old african kid
and unfortunatly i was a victim of child labouring, there are a lot of types of child labouring and the one i was engaged in was the most dangerous in my opinion and it was mine working and it was dangerous fatiging and overall toxic and honestly i'm lucky that i even survived 7 years working in mines.
I had to wake up everyday at 5 in the morning sometimes i won't get sleep because we would work late and get back and sleep at like 1 in the morning
And i even saw people dying in mining hole either they didn't have any oxygen or the mine collapsed on them
I saw death a multiple of times and i will never forget the horrible sights that i witnessed
All i wish for is to get adopted by a family who cares about me and treats me right and that can guarantee me school food and a roof that i can sleep under because i have a lot of time to grow, don't forget i'm only 15years old i can easly build a future for my self and family and have kids and treat them right and never let them experience what i experienced

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jeanaballain

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15 years old;I am african kid

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ce sont les deux petites fautes que j'ai relevé je pense qu'il reste des faute mais je ne comprend pas très bien le reste du texte

enzole

Réponse :Hi my name is Mamadou Slasta I'm a 15 years old african kid

and unfortunatly i was a victim of child labouring, there are a lot of types of child labouring and the one i was engaged in was the most dangerous in my opinion and it was mine working and it was dangerous fatiging and overall toxic and honestly i'm lucky that i even survived 7 years working in mines.

I had to wake up everyday at 5 in the morning sometimes

i won't get sleep because we would work late and get back and sleep at like 1 in the morning

And i even saw people dying in mining hole either they didn't have any oxygen or the mine collapsed on them

I saw death a multiple of times and i will never forget the horrible sights that i witnessedAll i wish for is to get adopted by a family who cares about me and treats me right and that can guarantee me school food and a roof that

i can sleep under because i have a lot of time to grow, don't forget i'm only 15years old i can easly build a future for my self and family and have kids and treat them right and never let them experience what i experienced

voila toute la correction

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