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Harry Potter and Pool Party

before the party :

Betty. - Do you already know that Anais' Birthday is coming soon?
Chiara. - Yes but of course! My birthday is falling the same day!
Betty. - Haha what a coincidence! We are celebrating with a Harry Potter pool party but we have to take into account our budget, it is not big.
Betty. - Yes I know, don't worry. We are going to celebrate at the swimming pool of my house!
Chiara. - Good idea! What time and date are we celebrating?
Betty. -Uhm, maybe June 2 at 8 p.m.
Chiara. - Yes, that's good. We are inviting our class!
Betty. - Perfect! Do you already have an idea of ​​what drinks we will serve?
Chiara. - Ah lemonade of course because beer and other alcoholic drinks are not for good students like us!
Betty. - Yes yes of course.
Betty. - We also are to making a delicious pie and Steven is the DJ for the party!
Chiara. - Oh too useful! I'm going to ask Steven, Adam, Shira, Lola and Blair to come for the organisation of the party.
Betty. - Me too! What are you going to buy for her?
Chiara. - Maybe something like jewelry.
Betty. - Good idea! So, I think I'm going to the stores and looking for something for Anais.

Steven, Adam, Shira,Lola and Blair arrived at Betty's home for the organization of the Harry Potter pool party.

Betty. - Steven you are the DJ for the party ok?
Steven. - Yes! and what am I bringing ?
Betty. - You are bringing the bottles of Soda, the packets of crips, the chocolate bars, cheese and crackers and that’s all.
Steven. - ok!
Betty. - Chiara, you are making the birthday cake and me the pie.
Chiara. - Chocolate cake or vanilla cake ?
Betty. - I think she is more liking chocolate cake to vanilla cake but i’m not sure.
Chiara. - Ok, i am making the chocolate cake and can i bringing garlands, spotlights, the buoys and sweets ?
Betty. - Yes of course, as you wish.
Adam. - And me? What am I bringing ?
Betty.- You are bringing the plates, glasses, spoons and napkins.
Adam. - it’s ok!
Betty. - Blair, you are making the invitation cards and don't forget to specify that you must have a Harry Potter costume and a swimsuit because we are going to have a Harry Potter evening and just after the pool party! AND IT'S A SURPRISE FOR ANAÏS !! because she has just returned to a prestigious school and it’s her birthday (and also the birthday to Chiara)
Blair. - Ok but can I send Anaïs a message just to tell her that we are preparing a surprise for her?
Betty. - especially not ! because that’s the purpose of a surprise, that it’s kept secret!!
Blair. - ok, of course! I am silent.
Betty. - You are taking photos during the party, Shira.
Shira. - but I don't know how to take pictures.
Betty. - Well then...Lola is taking photos.
Lola. - I have a perfect camera for photos !
Shira. - I am inviting my friends. You don't know them.
Betty. - NO, YOU CAN’T ! because the party is reserved for the comrades of our class. You are making you are putting all the decorations in my house: garlands, lights, ...
Shira. - Ok ok
Betty. - Shira, can you tell me who doesn't come to the party?
Shira. - Yes, Billie and Taylor can’t come to the party.
Betty. - Why ?
Shira. - Billie is making cookies and cupcakes for a charty.
Taylor is going to her aunt’s wedding.
Betty. - Ok, see you at the party.
Chiara. - Goodbye.
Steven. - Goodbye.
Adam. - Goodbye.
Shira. - Goodbye.
Lola. - Goodbye.
Blair. - Goodbye.


after the party :

Betty. - I’m cleaning up all the house with Lola and Adam.
Steven. - I’m taking down all the decoration.
Shira. - I’m washing up all the dishes.
Chiara. - I’m tidying the swimming pool.
Blair. - I'm going to throw out all the trash

Sagot :

Réponse :

Toutes les modifications sont en gras.

Ce qu'il y a à supprimer est souligné

Explications :

before the party :

Betty. - Do you already know that Anais' Birthday is coming soon?

Chiara. - Yes but ( à supprimer) of course! My birthday is falling the same day!

Betty. - Haha what a coincidence! We are celebrating with a Harry Potter pool party but we have to take into account our budget, it is not big.

Betty. - Yes I know, don't worry. We are going to celebrate at the swimming pool of my house!

Chiara. - Good idea! What time and date = remplace par When are we celebrating?

Betty. -Uhm, maybe June 2 at 8 p.m.

Chiara. - Yes, that's good. We are inviting our class!

Betty. - Perfect! Do you already have an idea of ​​what drinks we will are going to serve?

Chiara. - Ah lemonade of course because beers and other alcoholic drinks are not for good students like us!

Betty. - Yes yes of course.

Betty. - We also are to making a delicious pie and Steven is the DJ for the party! -> We are going to make

Chiara. - Oh too useful! I'm going to ask Steven, Adam, Shira, Lola and Blair to come for the organisation of the party.

Betty. - Me too! What are you going to buy for her?

Chiara. - Maybe something like jewelry.

Betty. - Good idea! So, I think I'm going to the stores and looking for something for Anais.

Steven, Adam, Shira,Lola and Blair arrived at Betty's home for the organization of the Harry Potter pool party.

Betty. - Steven you are the DJ for the party ok? Are you the DJ

Steven. - Yes! and what am I bringing ?

Betty. - You are bringing the bottles of Soda, the packets of crips, the chocolate bars, cheese and crackers and that’s all.

Steven. - ok!

Betty. - Chiara, you are making the birthday cake and I'm going to make the pie.

Chiara. - Chocolate cake or vanilla cake ? Chocolate or vanilla cake ?

Betty. - I think she is more liking chocolate cake to vanilla cake but i’m not sure.

Chiara. - Ok, i am making the chocolate cake and can ( il serait plus judicieux de dire may I bring, ou si tu veux quand même dire can, il faut dire can i bring, il y a pas de ing ici) i bringing garlands, spotlights, the buoys and sweets ?

Betty. - Yes of course, as you wish.

Adam. - And me? What am I bringing ?

Betty.- You are bringing the plates, glasses, spoons and napkins.

Adam. - it’s ok!

Betty. - Blair, you are making the invitation cards and don't forget to specify that you must have a Harry Potter costume and a swimsuit because we are going to have a Harry Potter evening and just after the pool party! AND IT'S A SURPRISE FOR ANAÏS !! because she has just returned to a prestigious school and it’s her birthday (and also the birthday to Chiara)

Blair. - Ok but can I send Anaïs a message just to tell her that we are preparing a surprise for her?

Betty. - especially not ! because that’s the purpose of a surprise, that it’s kept secret!!

Blair. - ok, of course! I am silent.

Betty. - You are taking photos during the party, Shira.

Shira. - but I don't know how to take pictures.

Betty. - Well then...Lola is taking photos.

Lola. - I have a perfect camera for photos !

Shira. - I am inviting my friends. You don't know them.

Betty. - NO, YOU CAN’T ! because the party is reserved for the comrades of our class. You are making you are putting all the decorations in my house: garlands, lights, ...

Shira. - Ok ok

Betty. - Shira, can you tell me who doesn't come to the party?

Shira. - Yes, Billie and Taylor can’t come to the party.

Betty. - Why ?

Shira. - Billie is making cookies and cupcakes for a charty.

Taylor is going to her aunt’s wedding.

Betty. - Ok, see you at the party.

Chiara. - Goodbye.

Steven. - Goodbye.

Adam. - Goodbye.

Shira. - Goodbye.

Lola. - Goodbye.

Blair. - Goodbye.

after the party :

Betty. - I’m cleaning up all the house with Lola and Adam.

Steven. - I’m taking down all the decoration.

Shira. - I’m washing up all the dishes.

Chiara. - I’m tidying the swimming pool.

Blair. - I'm going to throw out all the trash


"Harry Potter and Pool Party

before the party :

Betty. - Did you already know that Anais' Birthday is coming soon?

Chiara. - Yes of course! My birthday is falling on the same day!

Betty. - Haha what a coincidence! We are celebrating it with a Harry Potter pool party but we have to take into account our budget, it is not huge.

Betty. - Yes I know, don't worry. We are going to celebrate it at my house’s swimming pool !

Chiara. - Good idea! What time and date are we celebrating it ?

Betty. -Uhm, maybe June 2 at 8 p.m.

Chiara. - Yes, that's good. We are inviting our class!

Betty. - Perfect! Do you already have an idea of what drinks we’re going to serve?

Chiara. - Ah lemonade of course because beer and other alcoholic drinks are not for good students like us!

Betty. - Yes yes of course.

Betty. - We are also going to make a delicious pie and Steven will be the DJ for the party!

Chiara. - Oh nice! I'm going to ask
Steven, Adam, Shira, Lola and Blair to come for the organisation of the party.

Betty. - Me too! What are you going to buy her?

Chiara. - Maybe something like jewelry.

Betty. - Good idea! So, I think I'm going to go to the stores and look for something for Anais.

Steven, Adam, Shira,Lola and Blair arrived at Betty's home for the organization of the Harry Potter pool party.

Betty. - Steven you are the DJ for the party right ?

Steven. - Yes! and what am I bringing ?

Betty. - You are bringing the bottles of Soda, the packets of crips, the chocolate bars, cheese and crackers and that’s all.

Steven. - ok!

Betty. - Chiara, you are making the birthday cake and me the pie.

Chiara. - Chocolate cake or vanilla cake ?

Betty. - I think she prefers chocolate cake to vanilla cake but i’m not sure.

Chiara. - Ok, i am making the chocolate cake and can i bring garlands, spotlights, the buoys and sweets ?

Betty. - Yes of course, as you want.

Adam. - And me? What am I bringing ?

Betty.- You are bringing the plates, glasses, spoons and napkins.

Adam. - alright !

Betty. - Blair, you are making the invitation cards and don't forget to specify that you must have a Harry Potter costume and a swimsuit because we are going to have a Harry Potter evening and then the pool party! AND IT'S A SURPRISE FOR ANAÏS !! because she has just returned to a prestigious school and it’s her birthday (and also the birthday to Chiara)

Blair. - Ok but can I send Anaïs a message just to tell her that we are preparing a surprise for her?

Betty. - especially not ! because that’s the purpose of a surprise, it must be a secret!!

Blair. - ok, of course! I’ll be silent.

Betty. - You are taking photos during the party, Shira.

Shira. - but I don't know how to take pictures.

Betty. - Well then...Lola is taking photos.

Lola. - I have a perfect camera for photos !

Shira. - I am inviting my friends. You don't know them.

Betty. - NO, YOU CAN’T ! because the party is reserved for our classmates. You are hanging up all the decorations in my house: garlands, lights, ...

Shira. - Ok ok

Betty. - Shira, can you tell me who doesn't come to the party?

Shira. - Yes, Billie and Taylor can’t come to the party.

Betty. - Why ?

Shira. - Billie is making cookies and cupcakes for a charity.
Taylor is going to her aunt’s wedding.

Betty. - Ok, see you at the party.

Chiara. - Goodbye.
Steven. - Goodbye.
Adam. - Goodbye.
Shira. - Goodbye.
Lola. - Goodbye.
Blair. - Goodbye.


after the party :

Betty. - I’m cleaning up all the house with Lola and Adam.

Steven. - I’m taking down all the decoration.

Shira. - I’m doing all the dishes.

Chiara. - I’m cleaning the swimming pool.

Blair. - I'm going to throw out all the trash."



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