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Bonjour, je dois écrire ma propre versions d'un contes classique en anglais avec une morale à la fin et j'ai donc choisi la Belle et la Bête que j'ai réinventée en '' the beautiful boy and the beast''. J'ai déjà écrit le contes mais je pense qu'il y a beaucoup de fautes surtout au niveau des temps. Merci pour votre aide.

The beautiful boy and the beast

Once upon a time, a princess very wicked lived in a castle with her family. One day, a old woman was asking for help from princess . But princess refused and old woman transformed on witch and casted a spell evil. The princess was transformed into a horrible beast, her family deaded and the castle falled into ruin. The witch was announce : '' you will regain your beauty when someone  gives you real love  kiss '' and the witch disappeared.  Years later, a beautiful boy found the castle from the beast. He was walking when he saw the beast. He quickly fled in the woods. He anxiously ran when a wolf moved dangerously  towards him for devoured. Suddenly the boy was rescued through the beast from the castle and the wolf returned in the woods. The boy knelt in front of the beast and gave him a real love kiss. Instantly the beast transformed on beautiful princess. Finally The boy and princess fell in love and lived happily ever after. The moral of the story is don't trust by apparences.

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Bonjour, Voici une correction apportée à votre texte :

BEAUTY AND THE BEAST

Once upon a time, a princess very wicked lived in a castle with her family. One day, an old woman was asking her for help. But the princess refused and so the old woman changed herself into a witch and cast an evil spell upon her. The princess was transformed into a horrible beast, her family died and the castle fell into ruin. Then the witch forecasted (prédit): “You will regain beauty when someone gives you a true love’s kiss” and then she disappeared. Years later, a beautiful boy found the castle where the “beast” was lying (où se trouvait "la bête"). He was walking there, when he saw the beast. He then quickly fled into the woods. He anxiously ran when a hungry wolf moved dangerously towards him to devour him. Suddenly, the boy was rescued by the beast from the castle and the wolf got back into the woods. The boy knelt in front of the beast and gave him a true love’s kiss. Instantly, the beast returned to its original form of a beautiful princess. Finally, the boy and the princess fell in love and lived happily ever after. The moral of the story is don’t trust by appearances.

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