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[CORRECTION] Bonsoir ! J'ai un devoir en Anglais on doit témoigner à une fausse radio à propos de notre addiction. Ce texte sera dit à l'oral donc j'ai essayé de l'adapter ;)

Vous pouvez le corriger s'il vous plaît ?

Merci bcp !

Radio : Hi everyone and welcome to Virgin Radio.
Radio : First of all I wish you a happy New Year, I wish you good health and a good year !!
Radio : Today in the emission "Confessions" a listener will tell us about his addiction, he will eplain the consequences and how he feel about it.
Radio : So let's call him I hope he didn't forget our rendez-vous :rire:
**BIP BIP BIP BIP**
Me : Hi, who's calling ?
Radio : Hi it's Virgin Radio !
Me : Oh yes ! I almost forget Haha.
Radio : So today you will tell us about ur addiction, so introduce yourself
Me : That's right so hello my name is Robert i'm a digital hoarder so every photos, songs, old word documents I never delete.
Radio : Okay but why do you never delete ?
Me : Humm, I don't really know I think it is just in case I ever want to read them again juste for nostalgia.
Radio : :rire: What a strange addiction
Me : Yeah you're not the only one who said me that
Radio : What is the reactions of persons who know that you never delete everything ?
Me : Sometime they laugh nerviously but I don't know really why but some people understand me.
Radio : Are u happy in your life ? Because if you save everythink just for nostalgia it seems that you regret you're old life I think.
Me : No no no I'm happy in my life it's okay it is just in case that's strange i don't know why..
Radio : Okay so what are the consequences ?
Me : There is a lot, my house is full of old things so sometime it is difficult to pass. And when someone goes in my house they react like I'm crazy because I never read again my old files.
Me : Sometimes people react like I'm a psycopath and they wants to leave my home, it could be funny for you but it's not.
Radio : And what about your friends ?
Me : My friends know my addiction but I lost some friends because they think I'm crazy that's pretty sad.
Radio : And how do you feel about ur addiction ?
Me : Sometime I think I'm crazy because a lot of persons tell me that, it makes me really sad and I've already had a depression because of my addiction.
Radio : Okay so thank you to tell us about ur addiction I hope you will get better soon !
Me : Thanks bye !
Radio : Bye and Happy New Year !
Me : You to !

Sagot :


Radio : Hi everyone and welcome to Virgin Radio.

Radio : First of all I wish you a happy New Year, I wish you good health and a good year !!

Radio : Today in this show "Confessions" a listener will tell us about his addiction, he will explain the consequences and how he feels about it.
Radio : So let's call him I hope he didn't forget our meeting :laught :
**BIP BIP BIP BIP**

Me : Hi, who's calling ?

Radio : Hi it's Virgin Radio !

Me : Oh yes ! I almost forget Haha.

Radio : So today you will tell us about ur addiction, so you can introduce yourself

Me : That's right so hello my name is Robert i'm a digital hoarder so every pictures, songs, old word documents I had never delete.

Radio : Okay but why did you never delete them?

Me : Humm, I don't really know I think it is just in case I ever want to read them again just for nostalgia.

Radio : laught: What a strange addiction !

Me : Yeah you're not the only one who said that

Radio : What is the reactions of people who know that you never delete everything ?

Me : Sometimes they laugh nerviously but I don't really know why but some people understand me.

Radio : Are you happy in your life ? Because if you save everythink just for nostalgia it seems to me that you regret you're old life.

Me : No no no I'm joyful in my life i’m okay it is just in case that's strange i don't know why..

Radio : Okay so what are the consequences ?

Me : There is a lot, my house is full of old things so sometimes it is difficult to pass. And when someone goes in my house they react like I'm crazy because I never read again my old files.

Me : Sometimes people react like I'm a psycopath and they want to leave my home, it could be funny for you but it's not.

Radio : And what about your friends ?

Me : My friends know my addiction but I lost some of them because they think I'm crazy that's sad.

Radio : And how do you feel about ur addiction ?

Me : Sometimes I think I'm crazy because a lot of people tell me that, it makes me really sad and I've already had a depression because of my addiction.

Radio : Okay so thank you to tell us about ur addiction I hope you will get better soon !

Me : Thanks bye !

Radio : Bye and Happy New Year

Me : You too !

Voilà bonne soirée
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