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Bonjour à vous ! J'ai un devoir à faire qui consiste à dire ce qu'on fait/ a fait durant ce confinement (en anglais bien-sûr ^^). Pourrez vous me corriger s'il vous plaît ? :)

During my quarantine, I have learned and done a lot of things ! First, I have learned how to cook, so I cooked a lot for my family. I also helped a lot my mom to clean the house and to wash my clothes. The quarantine have allowed me to call my grandparents and my family every day. This is very great and it helps to cheer up. I started to meditate to relax and always stay positive. It helps me a lot to destress and always optimize.
During this period, I wached a lot of japanese anime like Hunter x Hunter, Cowboy Bebop...I also talked to a lot of people by the social networks. But there is one thing that a did a lot: I played a lot of video games. I discorvered many video games and I fall in love with Counter Stike Global offensive. I played the last week 61 hours of this game !
Unfortunately, I have done a lot of homeworks and many virtual classes because the quarantine doesn't mean the holidays. So, like school, I had to work a lot ! According to me, I am working more than school but I have to work. This bring me bored sometimes but when I am thinking that I'll play after the homeworks, I regain hope !

Merci bien à vous :D !

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During my quarantine, I have learned and done a lot of things! Firstly, I have learned how to cook, so I cooked a lot for my family. I also helped my mom a lot to clean the house and to wash my clothes. The quarantine has allowed me to call my grandparents and my family every day. This is very great and it helps to cheer up. I started to meditate, to relax, and always stay positive. It helps me a lot to destress and always optimize.

During this period, I watched a lot of Japanese anime like Hunter x Hunter, Cowboy Bebop...I also talked to a lot of people by the social networks. But there is one thing that a did a lot: I played a lot of video games. I discovered many video games and I fell in love with Counter Stike Global offensive. I played last week 61 hours of this game!

Unfortunately, I have done a lot of homework and many virtual classes because the quarantine doesn't mean holidays. So, like school, I had to work a lot! According to me, I am working more than school but I have to work. This brings me bored sometimes but when I am thinking that I'll play after the homework, I regain hope!

Réponse: Tu as répété beaucoup de fois le mot "lot" ou "a lot", essaye de le changer avec autre chose sinon ça fait trop de répétition.

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